GreetingsfromChina! I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite,.Nowshe’sgoingtobethree.I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS. Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?Thankyouverymuchinadvance. Yourstruly, LiHua
本文写作的内容要点如下:1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确,行文规范,描述有条不紊,称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文要活泼,感情真挚,语言表述准确,注意结合简单句和复合句,流畅自然,不露痕迹。 积累卡片英汉互译 好词1.delightedadj.欣喜的,快乐的 2.expressv.表达 3.givebirthtov.产生,生育 好句I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情,正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。评析:定语从句的使用。